My family is a kind of traditional one. It means that women in family have to master housework to become a capable wife. When we were child, my mom taught us lots of thing such as: how to cook a delicious meal, go to market, clean the floor…it’s seems that everything isn’t too hard for me to do, except one thing: ironing clothes although it’s quite easy. Because of having a terrible memory about it so every time I have to iron clothes, I always feel scared.
I still remember that was the first time I ironed clothes by myself. I also didn’t understand in that day why I chose my most beautiful shirt –a present when I graduated from primary school-to test. In spite of looking my mom did it many time, I still confused when I started to do it. After ironing it totally, I realized it still in normal condition. I mean it was a creased up shirt as it had never been ironed. I thought perhaps I ironed it in wrong way so I tried to do it again but it didn’t work. Finally, I found out I hadn’t connected it to the electricity. It was quite silly of me. After checking it carefully, I began at the beginning. Everything seemed to smooth but unluckily, when I nearly finished doing it, I had a phone’s call. I went to answer it and forgot the iron still in my shirt. When I came back, my beautiful shirt became another shape that I couldn’t describe. At that time, because of scaring and too young, I went straight to the iron, took it and threw away. But instead of picking its handle, I touched to its hottest place. So, at the result, I was scalded, I couldn’t do anything nearly a month. Since that time, when I have to iron clothes, I always feel terrible.
I also realized that I should be careful whenever doing something.
Thứ Sáu, 20 tháng 11, 2009
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