Nowadays, life is developing very fast. We have to work in highest quality, concentrate on business in high level. So we haven’t got enough time for some kind of entertainment that spend lots of time such as: chatting, watching movie, enjoying coffee…so music is a kind of entertainment that fit for modern people because we can listen music to relax while working. It not only doesn’t spend much time but also help us feel comfortable. Therefore, I think music play a necessary role in modern life.
Among many useful sides of music, I think it help us relax, feel comfortable and get out stress. As you know, modern life requires us to work and study very hard, we don’t have time for relaxing, so we’re easy to get stress. In these times, some soft song can help us relax. If we close eyes while listening to music, we will feel so relieved and everything seems to disappear. I think in that way, stress will be got out faster. And in our life, there are many thing that don’t smooth as we want, they often make us hurt, have sadness. In that case, a funny song can help us feel better. The lyric, melody of the song help us feel comfortable, everything will become easier and we have more faith in life. Music also helps us communicate what we want to talk with our lovers. In our country, it’s too difficult to say” I love you” to all member in family or say “sorry” to our friend when we make mistake. Or we want to say to a special person something that we can’t say in direct way. So a suitable song, through its content, will help us and they can understand what we want to mention.
I can’t image what the life is without music because it makes human life more interesting, happier and everything become well.
Thứ Sáu, 23 tháng 10, 2009
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